ComedyConfidence meets a banana peel

The Crosstown Tortoise

MR. ABE strolls the avenue at his own pace and arrives at every stop just as the delayed bus does, again and again down the whole route. The driver finally holds the doors open for him, and he waves the bus on.

Why this works on camera

Race framing with no racer — flat side-scrolling shots make a walking pace feel like a photo finish at every stop.

What the studio will do

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Bus versus stroll

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Even at every stop

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He waves the bus on

What a finished camera brief looks like

Example camera brief from our live demo — your film is written fresh from this premise. See it on the canvas

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MARA, 20s backyard engineer, freckles, orange beanie, oversized flight jacket with mission patches, kneels in…

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MARA, 20s backyard engineer, freckles, orange beanie, oversized flight jacket with mission patches, clips the…

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Macro on her gloved fingers opening as the line whips free, then MARA, 20s backyard engineer, freckles, orange…

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Free to storyboard once you're in — rendering uses plan credits.

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